Lifestyle
What makes people happyĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Two-part question
Đề bài
Many people say that money cannot buy happiness. What do you think makes people happy? What can a person do to become happier?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| wealth | noun | a large amount of money or property | wealth does not guarantee happiness |
| sense of purpose | noun phrase | the feeling that what you do matters | work that gives a sense of purpose |
| factor | noun | one of the things that causes a result | a key factor in success |
| meaningful | adjective | important and worth doing | a meaningful job |
| satisfied | adjective | pleased because you have what you want | satisfied with her life |
| mood | noun | the way a person feels at a particular time | music can improve your mood |
| habit | noun | something you do regularly | a healthy daily habit |
| voluntary work | noun phrase | work done to help others without pay | voluntary work at a hospital |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
A lot of people say that happiness cannot be bought. I believe that people are happy mainly when they have good relationships and a sense of purpose. People can do many things to be happier.
Bản đã sửa
It is often said that happiness cannot be bought. I believe that people are happy mainly when they have close relationships and a sense of purpose. A person can become happier by making time for others and by looking after their own health.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion