Visiting museumsĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Two-part question

Đề bài
Museums are popular with tourists but less so with local people. Why do people visit museums? How can museums attract more local visitors?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| exhibition | noun | a public show of objects or art | an exhibition of old maps |
| heritage | noun | the history and culture that a place passes on | the cultural heritage of a city |
| resident | noun | a person who lives in a place | local residents |
| admission | noun | the price you pay to enter a place | free admission on Sundays |
| at first hand | phrase | by seeing or doing something yourself | see the paintings at first hand |
| temporary | adjective | lasting only a short time | a temporary job |
| attract | verb | to make people come to a place | attract visitors from abroad |
| educational | adjective | teaching you something | an educational trip |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
Museums in many cities are popular with tourists, yet the people who live nearby rarely go. People visit museums because they want to learn about the past and enjoy a day out. Museums should do something for local people.
Bản đã sửa
Museums in many cities attract tourists, yet the people who live nearby rarely go. People visit museums mainly to learn about the past and enjoy a day out. In my view, museums could win over more local residents by changing their exhibitions regularly and lowering their prices.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion