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Visiting museumsĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Two-part question

Đề bài

Museums are popular with tourists but less so with local people. Why do people visit museums? How can museums attract more local visitors?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
exhibitionnouna public show of objects or artan exhibition of old maps
heritagenounthe history and culture that a place passes onthe cultural heritage of a city
residentnouna person who lives in a placelocal residents
admissionnounthe price you pay to enter a placefree admission on Sundays
at first handphraseby seeing or doing something yourselfsee the paintings at first hand
temporaryadjectivelasting only a short timea temporary job
attractverbto make people come to a placeattract visitors from abroad
educationaladjectiveteaching you somethingan educational trip

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

Museums in many cities are popular with tourists, yet the people who live nearby rarely go. People visit museums because they want to learn about the past and enjoy a day out. Museums should do something for local people.

Bản đã sửa

Museums in many cities attract tourists, yet the people who live nearby rarely go. People visit museums mainly to learn about the past and enjoy a day out. In my view, museums could win over more local residents by changing their exhibitions regularly and lowering their prices.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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