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Wanting to be famousĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Two-part question

Đề bài

Many young people today want to be famous. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or a negative trend?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
famenounbeing known by a very large number of peoplethe fame that a hit song brings
celebritynouna famous person, especially in entertainment or sporta television celebrity
aspireverbto want very much to achieve somethingaspire to be a doctor
admirationnouna feeling of respect and liking for someonewin the admiration of the public
within reachphrasepossible to get or achievea goal that is within reach
minoritynouna small part of a grouponly a small minority succeed
neglectverbto give too little attention to somethingneglect your health
pursueverbto try to achieve something over a period of timepursue a career in music

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

These days many young people really want to be famous. This is mainly because social media makes the lives of famous people look easy and exciting. I think this is a bad trend.

Bản đã sửa

These days many young people aspire to be famous. This is mainly because social media makes the lives of celebrities look easy and exciting. In my view, this is a largely negative trend, because most of these young people are chasing something they will never have.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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