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Children playing outdoors lessĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Two-part question

Đề bài
Children today spend less time playing outdoors than children did in the past. Why is this happening? What effects does it have on children?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| concern | noun | a feeling of worry about something | growing concerns about air quality |
| compete for | verb | to try to win something that others also want | shops compete for customers |
| heavy traffic | noun | a large number of vehicles on the road | heavy traffic in the morning |
| reluctant | adjective | not wanting to do something, so slow to do it | reluctant to spend money |
| weight gain | noun | an increase in how heavy a person is | weight gain in middle age |
| social skills | noun | the ability to talk to people and get on well with them | team sports develop social skills |
| settle | verb | to end a disagreement | settle an argument calmly |
| suffer | verb | to become worse because of something | his school work began to suffer |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
Children today spend much less time playing outside than children did a generation ago. This is mainly because of screens and parents' worry about safety. It has bad effects on them.
Bản đã sửa
Today's children spend much less time playing outside than children did a generation ago. This is mainly because of screens and parents' concerns about safety. As a result, many children are less fit and have fewer chances to develop social skills.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion