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Children playing outdoors lessĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Two-part question

Đề bài

Children today spend less time playing outdoors than children did in the past. Why is this happening? What effects does it have on children?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

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TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
concernnouna feeling of worry about somethinggrowing concerns about air quality
compete forverbto try to win something that others also wantshops compete for customers
heavy trafficnouna large number of vehicles on the roadheavy traffic in the morning
reluctantadjectivenot wanting to do something, so slow to do itreluctant to spend money
weight gainnounan increase in how heavy a person isweight gain in middle age
social skillsnounthe ability to talk to people and get on well with themteam sports develop social skills
settleverbto end a disagreementsettle an argument calmly
sufferverbto become worse because of somethinghis school work began to suffer

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Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

Children today spend much less time playing outside than children did a generation ago. This is mainly because of screens and parents' worry about safety. It has bad effects on them.

Bản đã sửa

Today's children spend much less time playing outside than children did a generation ago. This is mainly because of screens and parents' concerns about safety. As a result, many children are less fit and have fewer chances to develop social skills.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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