Shopping
Shopping onlineĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Two-part question

Đề bài
Nowadays more and more people shop online instead of going to shops. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| trend | noun | a general change in what people do | a growing trend among young people |
| development | noun | a change or a new situation | a positive development for consumers |
| convenience | noun | being easy to use and saving time | the convenience of shopping from home |
| compare | verb | to look at two or more things to see how they differ | compare prices before buying |
| low-income | adjective | earning only a little money | low-income families |
| drawback | noun | a disadvantage | the main drawback of the plan |
| outweigh | verb | to be more important than something else | the benefits outweigh the costs |
| harm | verb | to damage something or make it weaker | harm small businesses |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
These days a lot of people buy products on the internet instead of going to shops. This happens because online shopping is convenient and offers a wider choice at lower prices. I think this is a good thing.
Bản đã sửa
These days a growing number of people buy products on the internet instead of going to shops. This is mainly because online shopping is convenient and offers a wider choice at lower prices. In my view, this is a largely positive development, although it puts pressure on local shops.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion