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Shopping onlineĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Two-part question

Đề bài

Nowadays more and more people shop online instead of going to shops. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
trendnouna general change in what people doa growing trend among young people
developmentnouna change or a new situationa positive development for consumers
conveniencenounbeing easy to use and saving timethe convenience of shopping from home
compareverbto look at two or more things to see how they differcompare prices before buying
low-incomeadjectiveearning only a little moneylow-income families
drawbacknouna disadvantagethe main drawback of the plan
outweighverbto be more important than something elsethe benefits outweigh the costs
harmverbto damage something or make it weakerharm small businesses

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

These days a lot of people buy products on the internet instead of going to shops. This happens because online shopping is convenient and offers a wider choice at lower prices. I think this is a good thing.

Bản đã sửa

These days a growing number of people buy products on the internet instead of going to shops. This is mainly because online shopping is convenient and offers a wider choice at lower prices. In my view, this is a largely positive development, although it puts pressure on local shops.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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