Should zoos exist?Đề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Discuss both views

Đề bài
Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. Others believe that zoos are useful for protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| captivity | noun | the state of being kept in a zoo, a cage or another closed place and not being free | animals kept in captivity |
| enclosure | noun | an area with a fence or wall around it where animals are kept | a small enclosure |
| habitat | noun | the natural home of an animal or a plant | its natural habitat |
| endangered | adjective | at risk of disappearing from the world for ever | an endangered species |
| species | noun | a kind of animal or plant | save a species |
| conservation | noun | the protection of animals, plants and natural places | money for conservation projects |
| breed | verb | to keep animals so that they produce young | breed rare animals in safety |
| opponent | noun | a person who is against an idea or a plan | opponents of zoos |
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Bản gốc
Zoos are popular in many countries, but not everyone likes them. Some people think that keeping animals in cages is cruel and that zoos should be closed, while others believe that zoos are useful in protecting wild animals. I agree with the second group.
Bản đã sửa
Zoos are popular in many countries, but not everyone likes them. Some people think that keeping animals in captivity is cruel and that zoos should be closed, while others believe that zoos play an important role in protecting wild animals. In my opinion, the second view is closer to the truth, although only for zoos that put the needs of their animals first.
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- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion