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Should zoos exist?Đề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Discuss both views

Đề bài

Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed. Others believe that zoos are useful for protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

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TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
captivitynounthe state of being kept in a zoo, a cage or another closed place and not being freeanimals kept in captivity
enclosurenounan area with a fence or wall around it where animals are kepta small enclosure
habitatnounthe natural home of an animal or a plantits natural habitat
endangeredadjectiveat risk of disappearing from the world for everan endangered species
speciesnouna kind of animal or plantsave a species
conservationnounthe protection of animals, plants and natural placesmoney for conservation projects
breedverbto keep animals so that they produce youngbreed rare animals in safety
opponentnouna person who is against an idea or a planopponents of zoos

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

Zoos are popular in many countries, but not everyone likes them. Some people think that keeping animals in cages is cruel and that zoos should be closed, while others believe that zoos are useful in protecting wild animals. I agree with the second group.

Bản đã sửa

Zoos are popular in many countries, but not everyone likes them. Some people think that keeping animals in captivity is cruel and that zoos should be closed, while others believe that zoos play an important role in protecting wild animals. In my opinion, the second view is closer to the truth, although only for zoos that put the needs of their animals first.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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