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Science or the arts at schoolĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Discuss both views

Đề bài

Some people think that students should focus on science and technology. Others believe that history and the arts are just as important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
curriculumnounall the subjects that a school teachesa place in the curriculum
the latternounthe second of two things that have just been mentionedtea or coffee: I prefer the latter
graduatenouna person who has finished a university coursegraduates in engineering
in demandphrasewanted by a lot of people or employersskills that are in demand
fosterverbto help something to developfoster a love of reading
creativitynounthe ability to make new things or think of new ideasa job that needs creativity
evaluateverbto think carefully about how good or true something isevaluate a news story
balancedadjectivegiving equal attention to different partsa balanced view

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Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

Schools cannot teach everything, so some subjects get more room in the school plan than others. Some people think that students should focus on science and technology, and others believe that history and the arts are just as important. I agree with the second idea, because a good education should develop the whole person.

Bản đã sửa

Schools cannot teach everything, so some subjects get more room in the curriculum than others. Some people feel that pupils should concentrate on science and technology, while others insist that history and the arts deserve equal attention. I agree with the latter view, because a good education should develop the whole person.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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