Science or the arts at schoolĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Discuss both views

Đề bài
Some people think that students should focus on science and technology. Others believe that history and the arts are just as important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| curriculum | noun | all the subjects that a school teaches | a place in the curriculum |
| the latter | noun | the second of two things that have just been mentioned | tea or coffee: I prefer the latter |
| graduate | noun | a person who has finished a university course | graduates in engineering |
| in demand | phrase | wanted by a lot of people or employers | skills that are in demand |
| foster | verb | to help something to develop | foster a love of reading |
| creativity | noun | the ability to make new things or think of new ideas | a job that needs creativity |
| evaluate | verb | to think carefully about how good or true something is | evaluate a news story |
| balanced | adjective | giving equal attention to different parts | a balanced view |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
Schools cannot teach everything, so some subjects get more room in the school plan than others. Some people think that students should focus on science and technology, and others believe that history and the arts are just as important. I agree with the second idea, because a good education should develop the whole person.
Bản đã sửa
Schools cannot teach everything, so some subjects get more room in the curriculum than others. Some people feel that pupils should concentrate on science and technology, while others insist that history and the arts deserve equal attention. I agree with the latter view, because a good education should develop the whole person.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion