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Salary or job satisfactionĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Discuss both views

Đề bài

Some people believe that a high salary is the most important thing in a job. Others think that job satisfaction matters more. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
incomenounthe money a person earnslive on a modest income
well-paidadjectiveearning or giving a lot of moneya well-paid position
financial securitynounhaving enough money so that you do not worry about ita salary that gives financial security
rewardingadjectivemaking you feel that what you do is worth doinga rewarding career
motivatedadjectivewanting to work hard and do wellmotivated employees
advocatenouna person who supports an ideaadvocates of this view
maintainverbto say firmly that something is trueothers maintain that pay is not everything
meritnouna good quality that deserves respectboth views have some merit

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

People value different things at work. Some say that a high salary is the most important thing when choosing a job, while others believe that feeling satisfied at work matters more. I think job satisfaction is more important.

Bản đã sửa

People value different things at work. Some argue that a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job, while others believe that feeling satisfied at work matters more. Although I accept that pay matters, I would argue that job satisfaction is more important in the long term.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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