Salary or job satisfactionĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Discuss both views

Đề bài
Some people believe that a high salary is the most important thing in a job. Others think that job satisfaction matters more. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| income | noun | the money a person earns | live on a modest income |
| well-paid | adjective | earning or giving a lot of money | a well-paid position |
| financial security | noun | having enough money so that you do not worry about it | a salary that gives financial security |
| rewarding | adjective | making you feel that what you do is worth doing | a rewarding career |
| motivated | adjective | wanting to work hard and do well | motivated employees |
| advocate | noun | a person who supports an idea | advocates of this view |
| maintain | verb | to say firmly that something is true | others maintain that pay is not everything |
| merit | noun | a good quality that deserves respect | both views have some merit |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
People value different things at work. Some say that a high salary is the most important thing when choosing a job, while others believe that feeling satisfied at work matters more. I think job satisfaction is more important.
Bản đã sửa
People value different things at work. Some argue that a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job, while others believe that feeling satisfied at work matters more. Although I accept that pay matters, I would argue that job satisfaction is more important in the long term.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion