Living alone or with familyĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Discuss both views

Đề bài
Some people prefer to live alone. Others think it is better to live with family members. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| independence | noun | the freedom to make your own decisions without asking others | value the independence of having your own flat |
| privacy | noun | being able to be alone and not watched or disturbed | sharing a room means less privacy |
| relative | noun | a member of your family | share a home with relatives |
| lifestyle | noun | the way a person lives | this lifestyle suits young adults |
| self-reliant | adjective | able to do things for yourself without help | become more self-reliant |
| household bills | noun | the regular costs of a home, such as electricity and water | share the rent and household bills |
| isolated | adjective | cut off from other people | feel isolated in a new city |
| appeal | noun | the quality that makes something attractive | understand the appeal of living alone |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
In many countries, more and more adults now live alone. Some people like the independence that this brings, while others believe that sharing a home with relatives is a better choice. I think living with family is better.
Bản đã sửa
In many countries, more and more adults now live on their own. Some people value the independence that this brings, while others believe that sharing a home with relatives is a better choice. Although I understand the appeal of living alone, in my view living with family members has more to offer.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion