Education

Competition or cooperation at schoolĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Discuss both views

Đề bài

Some people think that competition at school is good for children. Others believe that children should be taught to cooperate instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ

Từ	Từ loại	Nghĩa	Ví dụ
beneficial	adjective	having a good effect	exercise is beneficial for children
cooperate	verb	to work together with other people	pupils cooperate on a project
teamwork	noun	the activity of working well together as a group	a task that needs teamwork
compromise	verb	to accept less than you wanted so that people can agree	learn to listen and compromise
motivate	verb	to make someone want to do something well	prizes motivate pupils to try harder
goal	noun	something that you hope to achieve	a clear goal for the term
approach	noun	a way of doing something	two approaches to teaching
nevertheless	adverb	in spite of what has just been said	The test was hard. Nevertheless, she passed.

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Bản gốc

Teachers try to make their pupils work hard in different ways. People often say that competition at school is good for children, while others believe that pupils should be taught to cooperate instead. I think competition is good.

Bản đã sửa

Teachers try to make their pupils work hard in different ways. It is often argued that competition at school is beneficial for children, while others believe that pupils should be taught to cooperate instead. My own view is that some competition is healthy, as long as pupils also learn to work in teams.

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Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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