Education
Students with part-time jobsĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Advantages and disadvantages
Đề bài
Many university students have a part-time job while they study. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| alongside | preposition | at the same time as something else | work alongside their studies |
| benefit | verb | to be useful or helpful to someone | the scheme benefits young workers |
| practical skills | noun | abilities you use to do real tasks | learn practical skills in a kitchen |
| value | verb | to think that something is important | managers value honesty |
| at the expense of | phrase | causing loss or harm to something else | speed at the expense of quality |
| exhausted | adjective | extremely tired | exhausted after a long shift |
| suffer | verb | to become worse | her results began to suffer |
| give priority to | phrase | to treat something as more important than other things | give priority to safety |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
Nowadays, many university students have a part-time job while they study. In my opinion, this is not a good idea.
Bản đã sửa
Nowadays, many university students work part-time alongside their studies. In my opinion, although this brings some benefits, the disadvantages are more significant, since paid work takes time and energy away from the degree itself.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion