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Keeping in touch on social mediaĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Advantages and disadvantages

Đề bài

Many people now keep in touch with friends and family through social media rather than face to face. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

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TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
stay in contact withphraseto go on communicating with somebodystay in contact with former colleagues
rarelyadverbnot oftenshe rarely eats meat
shallowadjectivenot deep, not seriousa shallow conversation about the weather
lose touchphraseto stop communicating with somebody little by littlelose touch after leaving school
despiteprepositionused before a noun to say that something does not change the resultdespite the rain, the match went on
be likely tophraseused to say that something will probably happenprices are likely to rise
lonelyadjectiveunhappy because you have too little contact with other peoplefeel lonely in a new city
outweighverbto be greater or more important than something elsethe risks outweigh the rewards

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

These days, many people talk to friends and relatives online, and they do not often meet them in person. This habit has good sides, but I think it is bad.

Bản đã sửa

These days, many people stay in contact with friends and relatives online, and they rarely meet them in person. Although this habit has clear benefits, I believe its drawbacks are greater, because contact on a screen cannot fully replace time spent together.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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