Education
A year off before universityĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Advantages and disadvantages
Đề bài
Some young people take a year off between finishing school and starting university. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| gap year | noun | a year off between school and university | take a gap year before university |
| benefit | noun | a good result of something | the benefits of working abroad |
| drawback | noun | a bad side of something | the main drawback of this plan |
| outweigh | verb | to be bigger or more important than something else | the benefits outweigh the costs |
| on balance | phrase | after thinking about both sides | on balance, it is a wise choice |
| admittedly | adverb | used when you accept that the other side has a point | admittedly, the plan is expensive |
| peers | noun | people of the same age or at the same stage as you | graduate later than their peers |
| maturity | noun | the quality of thinking and acting like an adult | gain maturity and confidence |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
These days, some young people take a year off between finishing school and starting university. This choice has both good and bad points. In my view, it is a good idea.
Bản đã sửa
These days, some young people take a gap year between finishing school and starting university. This choice has both benefits and drawbacks. In my view, the advantages of doing so clearly outweigh the disadvantages, because the experience gained is worth the short delay.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion