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Being self-employedĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Advantages and disadvantages

Đề bài

An increasing number of people are choosing to work for themselves rather than for a company. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
self-employedadjectiveworking for yourself, not for an employera self-employed plumber
flexibilitynounthe freedom to change when and how you do somethingflexibility in working hours
profitnounthe money a business has left after it pays its coststhe shop made a small profit
salariedadjectivepaid the same fixed amount by an employer every montha salaried position in a bank
stable incomenounmoney coming in that does not change much from month to montha family needs a stable income
sick paynounmoney an employer pays you when you are too ill to worktwo weeks of sick pay
financial difficultynouna serious lack of moneythe family was in financial difficulty
tend toverbto do something in most cases, but not alwaysprices tend to rise in summer

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

These days, many people decide to be their own boss instead of working for a boss. This choice has both advantages and disadvantages. In my view, it is not a very good idea.

Bản đã sửa

These days, many people decide to become self-employed instead of working for an employer. This choice has both advantages and disadvantages. In my view, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages for most people, because the risks are greater than the rewards.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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