Starting a foreign language earlyĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Advantages and disadvantages

Đề bài
Some experts believe that children should begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| mother tongue | noun | the first language you learn at home as a child | Spanish is her mother tongue |
| fluent | adjective | able to speak a language easily and well | become fluent in French |
| pronunciation | noun | the way you say the sounds of a language | clear pronunciation |
| qualified | adjective | having the training needed for a job | a qualified nurse |
| approach | noun | a way of doing something | a new approach to teaching maths |
| outweigh | verb | to be greater or more important than something else | the risks are outweighed by the rewards |
| in addition | phrase | used to add another point on the same side | in addition, the flat is close to the station |
| embarrassment | noun | the uncomfortable feeling when people may laugh at you | sing in public without embarrassment |
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Bản gốc
Some experts say that children should start a foreign language at primary school instead of waiting until secondary school. This idea has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, it is good for children.
Bản đã sửa
Some experts argue that children should start a foreign language at primary school instead of waiting until secondary school. This approach has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, the benefits are considerably greater than the drawbacks, since young children pick up languages naturally and gain several extra years of practice.
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Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion