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Paying without cashĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Advantages and disadvantages

Đề bài

In many countries people now pay with cards and phones instead of cash. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
cashless paymentnounpaying with a card or a phone, without notes or coinscashless payment in supermarkets
shiftnouna change from one way of doing something to anothera shift from letters to email
overspendverbto spend more money than you plannedit is easy to overspend in the sales
excludedadjectivenot able to take part in somethingfeel excluded from the group
fraudnounthe crime of tricking people to take their moneya victim of online fraud
whereasconjunctionused to set one fact against a different onehe drives to work, whereas she cycles
keep track ofphraseto follow how something changes over timekeep track of your homework
provided thatphraseonly ifyou may leave early, provided that the work is finished

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Bản gốc

Nowadays, shoppers in many countries rely on cards and phones rather than notes and coins. This thing has both benefits and drawbacks. In my view, it is a good thing.

Bản đã sửa

Nowadays, shoppers in many countries rely on cashless payment rather than notes and coins. This shift has both benefits and drawbacks. In my view, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, because paying electronically is quicker and safer for most people, while its risks can be controlled.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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