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Young people without jobsĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Problem and solution

Đề bài

Many young people cannot find a job after they leave school or university. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
graduatenouna person who has finished a university coursea recent graduate in engineering
employernouna person or company that pays people to workwhat employers look for
qualificationnouna certificate or degree you get when you pass a coursea qualification in accounting
practicaladjectiveconnected with doing real tasks, not only with ideaspractical skills for the workplace
vacancynouna job that is open and waiting for someonea vacancy for a sales assistant
hireverbto give someone a jobhire two new members of staff
internshipnouna short period of work in a company, done to learn about the joba summer internship at a bank
reluctantadjectivenot willing to do somethingreluctant to take a risk

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

In many countries, a large number of school leavers and graduates cannot get a job. This problem happens because of a lack of practical skills among young people and a limited number of suitable vacancies. I will tell you the reasons and what we can do.

Bản đã sửa

In many countries, a large number of school leavers and graduates struggle to find work. This problem is caused by a lack of practical skills among young people and a limited number of suitable vacancies. This essay will explain these two causes and then suggest how they could be dealt with.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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