Young people without jobsĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Problem and solution

Đề bài
Many young people cannot find a job after they leave school or university. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| graduate | noun | a person who has finished a university course | a recent graduate in engineering |
| employer | noun | a person or company that pays people to work | what employers look for |
| qualification | noun | a certificate or degree you get when you pass a course | a qualification in accounting |
| practical | adjective | connected with doing real tasks, not only with ideas | practical skills for the workplace |
| vacancy | noun | a job that is open and waiting for someone | a vacancy for a sales assistant |
| hire | verb | to give someone a job | hire two new members of staff |
| internship | noun | a short period of work in a company, done to learn about the job | a summer internship at a bank |
| reluctant | adjective | not willing to do something | reluctant to take a risk |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
In many countries, a large number of school leavers and graduates cannot get a job. This problem happens because of a lack of practical skills among young people and a limited number of suitable vacancies. I will tell you the reasons and what we can do.
Bản đã sửa
In many countries, a large number of school leavers and graduates struggle to find work. This problem is caused by a lack of practical skills among young people and a limited number of suitable vacancies. This essay will explain these two causes and then suggest how they could be dealt with.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
Phần còn lại của bài luyện
Bạn cần tài khoản để luyện các đoạn sau.
- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion