Technology
Too much time on phonesĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Problem and solution

Đề bài
Many young people spend several hours a day on their phones. What problems does this cause, and what solutions can you suggest?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| habit | noun | something that a person does often and regularly | the habit of reading before bed |
| harmful | adjective | causing damage or injury | harmful to the environment |
| concentrate | verb | to give all your attention to one thing | concentrate on the lesson |
| interrupt | verb | to stop someone for a short time while they are doing something | interrupt a meeting |
| lead to | verb | to cause something to happen | lead to higher prices |
| limit | noun | the largest amount of something that is allowed | a speed limit near schools |
| encourage | verb | to make someone more likely to do something | encourage people to walk |
| entertainment | noun | things such as films, games and music that people enjoy | live entertainment in the park |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
It is now common for teenagers and young adults to spend a lot of time on their phones. This habit has bad effects on both their health and their studies. I am going to write about the problems and give solutions.
Bản đã sửa
It is now common for teenagers and young adults to spend many hours a day on their phones. This habit has harmful effects on both their health and their studies. This essay will describe these problems and then put forward some possible solutions.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
Phần còn lại của bài luyện
Bạn cần tài khoản để luyện các đoạn sau.
- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion