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Too much time on phonesĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Problem and solution

Đề bài

Many young people spend several hours a day on their phones. What problems does this cause, and what solutions can you suggest?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
habitnounsomething that a person does often and regularlythe habit of reading before bed
harmfuladjectivecausing damage or injuryharmful to the environment
concentrateverbto give all your attention to one thingconcentrate on the lesson
interruptverbto stop someone for a short time while they are doing somethinginterrupt a meeting
lead toverbto cause something to happenlead to higher prices
limitnounthe largest amount of something that is alloweda speed limit near schools
encourageverbto make someone more likely to do somethingencourage people to walk
entertainmentnounthings such as films, games and music that people enjoylive entertainment in the park

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

It is now common for teenagers and young adults to spend a lot of time on their phones. This habit has bad effects on both their health and their studies. I am going to write about the problems and give solutions.

Bản đã sửa

It is now common for teenagers and young adults to spend many hours a day on their phones. This habit has harmful effects on both their health and their studies. This essay will describe these problems and then put forward some possible solutions.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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