Health
Overweight childrenĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Problem and solution
Đề bài
In many countries more and more children are overweight. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| obesity | noun | the condition of being very overweight in a way that is bad for health | rising levels of obesity |
| diet | noun | the food that a person usually eats | a diet of rice and vegetables |
| increasingly | adverb | more and more over time | increasingly popular with tourists |
| inactive | adjective | not moving or exercising much | an inactive job in an office |
| lifestyle | noun | the way a person lives, works and spends free time | a busy city lifestyle |
| balanced | adjective | containing the right amounts of different things | a balanced mix of work and rest |
| role | noun | the part that someone has in a situation | play a role in the decision |
| address | verb | to try to deal with a problem | address the shortage of nurses |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
Childhood obesity is becoming more and more common in many parts of the world. The main causes are bad food and a lack of physical activity. I will talk about why this happens and how to stop it.
Bản đã sửa
Childhood obesity is becoming increasingly common in many parts of the world. The main causes are an unhealthy diet and a lack of physical activity. This essay will examine these causes and then suggest how the problem could be addressed.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
Phần còn lại của bài luyện
Bạn cần tài khoản để luyện các đoạn sau.
- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion