Stress at workĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Problem and solution

Đề bài
More and more people say they suffer from stress at work. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| workload | noun | the amount of work that a person has to do | a heavy workload |
| deadline | noun | the time by which a piece of work must be finished | meet a deadline |
| staff | noun | all the people who work for a company | hire more staff |
| report | verb | to say that something is true, often about yourself | many patients report feeling tired |
| blur | verb | to make the difference between two things less clear | blur the line between study and rest |
| realistic | adjective | possible to achieve in the real world | set realistic goals |
| working hours | noun (plural) | the part of the day when a person is at work | long working hours |
| benefit | verb | to be good for someone or something | a change that benefits everyone |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
Nowadays, many employees say that they feel under constant pressure in their jobs. This is mainly due to too much work and to technology that makes it hard to switch off after work. I am going to write about the reasons and what we can do.
Bản đã sửa
Nowadays, many employees report that they feel under constant pressure in their jobs. This is mainly due to excessive workloads and to technology that makes it hard to switch off after work. This essay will explain these two causes and propose some practical solutions.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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Bạn cần tài khoản để luyện các đoạn sau.
- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion