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Stress at workĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Problem and solution

Đề bài

More and more people say they suffer from stress at work. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
workloadnounthe amount of work that a person has to doa heavy workload
deadlinenounthe time by which a piece of work must be finishedmeet a deadline
staffnounall the people who work for a companyhire more staff
reportverbto say that something is true, often about yourselfmany patients report feeling tired
blurverbto make the difference between two things less clearblur the line between study and rest
realisticadjectivepossible to achieve in the real worldset realistic goals
working hoursnoun (plural)the part of the day when a person is at worklong working hours
benefitverbto be good for someone or somethinga change that benefits everyone

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

Nowadays, many employees say that they feel under constant pressure in their jobs. This is mainly due to too much work and to technology that makes it hard to switch off after work. I am going to write about the reasons and what we can do.

Bản đã sửa

Nowadays, many employees report that they feel under constant pressure in their jobs. This is mainly due to excessive workloads and to technology that makes it hard to switch off after work. This essay will explain these two causes and propose some practical solutions.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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