Technology
Smartphones for childrenĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Opinion
Đề bài
Children should not be allowed to own a smartphone until they are sixteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Từ vựng theo chủ đề
8 từ| Từ | Từ loại | Nghĩa | Ví dụ |
|---|---|---|---|
| screen time | noun | the time a person spends looking at a phone, tablet or TV | limit a child's screen time |
| self-control | noun | the ability to stop yourself doing something you want to do | young children have little self-control |
| distract | verb | to take someone's attention away from what they should be doing | phones distract pupils from homework |
| harmful | adjective | causing damage or hurt | harmful content on the internet |
| monitor | verb | to watch and check something regularly | monitor what a child does online |
| rely on | verb | to need something or someone in order to do a task | rely on a phone for directions |
| responsibly | adverb | in a sensible way that can be trusted | spend money responsibly |
| unsuitable | adjective | not right for a particular person or purpose | a film that is unsuitable for children |
Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa
Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.
Bản gốc
These days, many children receive their first smartphone at a very young age. Some people believe that owning a smartphone should not be OK before the age of sixteen. I agree a little with this.
Bản đã sửa
These days, many children receive their first smartphone at a very young age. Some people believe that owning one should not be permitted before the age of sixteen. I partly agree: young children are better off without their own phone, but a ban until sixteen seems too strict.
Chỗ đã sửa
Bài luyện gồm những gì
- Warm up8 từ vựng
- Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
- Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
- Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
- Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ
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- Body paragraph 1
- Body paragraph 2
- Conclusion