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Advertising to childrenĐề IELTS Writing Task 2, dạng Opinion

Đề bài

Advertising aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

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TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
be exposed toverb phraseto see or experience something often, without choosing tobe exposed to advertising every day
prohibitverbto say officially that something is not allowedprohibit smoking in public places
persuasionnounthe act of making someone believe or do somethingthe power of persuasion
easily influencedadjective phrasequick to change what you think because of other peopleeasily influenced by friends
brandnounthe name a company gives to its producta well-known brand of trainers
eating habitsnoun (plural)what and how a person usually eatshealthy eating habits
superviseverbto watch someone to make sure they are safe or behave wellsupervise children in the playground
lackverbto not have something that is neededlack experience

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

Children today see advertisements on television, websites and mobile games. Some people argue that marketing directed at children should be banned. I agree with this.

Bản đã sửa

Children today are exposed to advertisements on television, websites and mobile games. Some people argue that marketing directed at children should be prohibited. I completely agree, because young children cannot judge what they are shown and are often encouraged to want unhealthy products.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the question3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ
  6. Conclusion3 nhiệm vụ

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  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
  • Conclusion
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