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Volunteering in one townĐề IELTS Writing Task 1, dạng Mixed charts

Đề bài

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people in five age groups who did voluntary work in the town of Millbrook in 2023, and the pie chart shows the kind of work that volunteers did. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Volunteering in Millbrook
People who volunteered in 2023, by age group (%)
01020304016 to 2425 to 3435 to 4950 to 6465 and overVolunteers, 16 to 24: 18%18Volunteers, 25 to 34: 12%12Volunteers, 35 to 49: 20%20Volunteers, 50 to 64: 27%27Volunteers, 65 and over: 36%36
Kind of work done by volunteers in 2023
Helping older people: 32%32%Sports clubs: 24%24%Charity shops: 20%20%Environmental work: 16%16%Other: 8%8%
  • Helping older people
  • Sports clubs
  • Charity shops
  • Environmental work
  • Other

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
compareverbto show how two or more things are different or alikethe chart compares five age groups
volunteerverbto work without being paid, because you want to help18% of young people volunteered
amongprepositionin a group of people or thingshighest among older people
exceptionnounsomething that does not follow the general patternone city was an exception
likelyadjectivehaving a good chance of doing somethingtwice as likely to vote
compared withlinkerused to set one figure next to another32%, compared with 24%
a thirdnounone of three equal parts, about 33%almost a third of volunteers
carry outverbto do a task or a piece of workthey carried out repairs

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

The bar chart shows the percentage of people in five age groups who helped for free in Millbrook in 2023, and the pie chart shows what work they did.

Bản đã sửa

The bar chart compares the percentage of people in five age groups who volunteered in Millbrook in 2023, while the pie chart shows how volunteers were divided between different kinds of work.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the charts3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Overview3 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  6. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ

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  • Overview
  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
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