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A city bike hire schemeĐề IELTS Writing Task 1, dạng Mixed charts

Đề bài

The line graph below shows the number of bike hires per month in the city of Newbridge in 2022, and the pie chart shows the reasons why bikes were hired in that year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Newbridge bike hire scheme
Bike hires per month (thousands)
020406080100JanFebMarAprMayJunJulAugSepOctNovDecHires, Jan: 20 thousandHires, Feb: 21 thousandHires, Mar: 30 thousandHires, Apr: 45 thousandHires, May: 60 thousandHires, Jun: 78 thousandHires, Jul: 90 thousandHires, Aug: 88 thousandHires, Sep: 65 thousandHires, Oct: 42 thousandHires, Nov: 28 thousandHires, Dec: 18 thousand
Reasons for hiring a bike in 2022
Leisure: 48%48%Commuting to work: 31%31%Shopping: 12%12%Travel to school or college: 6%Other: 3%
  • Leisure
  • Commuting to work
  • Shopping
  • Travel to school or college
  • Other

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
varyverbto be different at different timeshires varied from month to month
faradverbby a large amount (used before a comparative)far higher in summer
peaknounthe highest pointa peak of 90,000 in July
timesnounused to say how much bigger one figure is than anotherthree times the January figure
declinenouna falla steep decline in hires
as forlinkerused to move on to a new subjectAs for the second chart, leisure came first
the most commonadjectivefound more often than any otherthe most common reason
four fifthsnounfour of five equal parts, or 80%almost four fifths of the total

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

The line graph shows how the number of bike users in Newbridge went up and down from month to month in 2022, while the pie chart gives the reasons for hiring a bike in 2022.

Bản đã sửa

The line graph shows how the number of bike hires in Newbridge varied from month to month in 2022, while the pie chart gives the reasons for hiring a bike in the same year.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the charts3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Overview3 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  6. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ

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  • Overview
  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
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