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Unemployment ratesĐề IELTS Writing Task 1, dạng Line graph

Đề bài

The graph below shows unemployment rates for three age groups in one country between 2005 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Unemployment rate by age group (%)
051015202520052008201120142017202016 to 24, 2005: 12%16 to 24, 2008: 13%16 to 24, 2011: 21%16 to 24, 2014: 18%16 to 24, 2017: 14%16 to 24, 2020: 13%25 to 49, 2005: 6%25 to 49, 2008: 6%25 to 49, 2011: 10%25 to 49, 2014: 8%25 to 49, 2017: 6%25 to 49, 2020: 5%50 to 64, 2005: 4%50 to 64, 2008: 4%50 to 64, 2011: 7%50 to 64, 2014: 7%50 to 64, 2017: 6%50 to 64, 2020: 6%
  • 16 to 24
  • 25 to 49
  • 50 to 64

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
unemployment ratenounthe percentage of people who want a job but do not have onethe unemployment rate reached 21%
out of workphrasewithout a job12% of young people were out of work
age groupnounall the people between two agesthe 25 to 49 age group
respectivelyadverbin the same order as the things just named10% and 7% respectively
percentage pointnounthe unit for the gap between two percentagesa fall of eight percentage points
halveverbto fall to half of the earlier levelthe rate halved, from 10% to 5%
marginallyadverbby a very small amountthe figure fell marginally
fall backverbto go down again after a risethe rate fell back after 2011

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

The graph shows how many people had no job in three groups of people in one country for fifteen years, from 2005 to 2020.

Bản đã sửa

The graph shows unemployment rates in three age groups in one country over a fifteen-year period, from 2005 to 2020.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the graph3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Overview3 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  6. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ

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  • Overview
  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
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