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Cinema attendanceĐề IELTS Writing Task 1, dạng Line graph

Đề bài

The graph below shows the average number of cinema visits per person each year for four age groups in one country between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Cinema visits per person each year
05102000200520102015202015 to 24, 2000: 10 visits15 to 24, 2005: 9 visits15 to 24, 2010: 8 visits15 to 24, 2015: 6 visits15 to 24, 2020: 4.5 visits25 to 39, 2000: 6 visits25 to 39, 2005: 6.5 visits25 to 39, 2010: 6 visits25 to 39, 2015: 5 visits25 to 39, 2020: 4 visits40 to 59, 2000: 3 visits40 to 59, 2005: 3 visits40 to 59, 2010: 3.5 visits40 to 59, 2015: 3 visits40 to 59, 2020: 3 visits60 and over, 2000: 1 visits60 and over, 2005: 2 visits60 and over, 2010: 3 visits60 and over, 2015: 4 visits60 and over, 2020: 5 visits
  • 15 to 24
  • 25 to 39
  • 40 to 59
  • 60 and over

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
attendancenounhow many times people go to a place or an eventcinema attendance fell
cinema-goernouna person who goes to the cinemathe most frequent cinema-goers
frequentlyadverboftenthey went more frequently
annuallyadverbin each yearten visits annually
per personphrasefor each individualone visit per person
narrowverbto become smaller (used for a gap)the gap narrowed
rangeverbto stay between two limitsit ranged between 3 and 3.5
fivefoldadjectivefive times as largea fivefold increase

Mở bài, trước và sau khi sửa

Bản đã sửa dùng đáp án mẫu của từng nhiệm vụ trong bước Introduction.

Bản gốc

The graph shows how many times people in each of four age groups went to the cinema in one year between 2000 and 2020.

Bản đã sửa

The graph shows how often the average person in each of four age groups went to the cinema each year between 2000 and 2020.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the graph3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Overview3 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  6. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ

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  • Overview
  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
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