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Museum visitors by ageĐề IELTS Writing Task 1, dạng Bar chart

Đề bài

The chart below shows the number of visitors to three museums in the city of Westbrook in 2023, by age group. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Visitors to three museums in Westbrook in 2023, by age group (thousands)
050100150Science MuseumHistory MuseumArt MuseumUnder 18, Science Museum: 118thousand118Under 18, History Museum: 60thousand60Under 18, Art Museum: 30thousand3018 to 50, Science Museum: 90thousand9018 to 50, History Museum: 80thousand8018 to 50, Art Museum: 70thousand70Over 50, Science Museum: 40thousand40Over 50, History Museum: 100thousand100Over 50, Art Museum: 112thousand112
  • Under 18
  • 18 to 50
  • Over 50

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

8 từ
TừTừ loạiNghĩaVí dụ
age groupnounpeople who are between two ages, counted togetherthe 18 to 50 age group
visitor numbersnounhow many people come to a placevisitor numbers were high in July
attractverbto make people want to comethe zoo attracted 90,000 people
preferverbto choose one thing more than anotherolder visitors preferred the gallery
the oppositeadjectiveas different as possible, turned the other way roundthe opposite pattern
just overphrasea little more than a numberjust over 200,000 tickets
similaradjectiveclose to each other but not exactly equalsimilar numbers of men and women
rangeverbto go from the lowest figure to the highestprices ranged from 5 to 9 dollars

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Bản gốc

The bar chart is about the number of people who visited three museums in the city of Westbrook in 2023. It puts them into three ages.

Bản đã sửa

The bar chart gives information about the number of people who visited three museums in the city of Westbrook in 2023. It divides them into three age groups.

Chỗ đã sửa

Bài luyện gồm những gì

  1. Warm up8 từ vựng
  2. Understand the chart3 nhiệm vụ
  3. Introduction3 nhiệm vụ
  4. Overview3 nhiệm vụ
  5. Body paragraph 14 nhiệm vụ
  6. Body paragraph 24 nhiệm vụ

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  • Overview
  • Body paragraph 1
  • Body paragraph 2
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